The Official Writing Challenge
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07/31/08
How precious. Your words made me feel for this boy. Nice details showing the action. :)
08/02/08
How sad that the parents didn't realize the potential ability of their son if they could have just pointed him in another direction. Interesting use of the prompt.
08/04/08
Oh, the poor absent-minded little fellow! He sounds like a fish out of water :( This was very sweet. I'm glad his parents weren't ratting on him for not being high-performance at the end. One thing to note: when you come to the end of a paragraph, double space so there's at least one blank line between paragraphs. This helps the reader see the paragraphs individually and keep his place in the reading better. Keep writing!!!
08/06/08
You kept me reading. I felt for this poor little guy...and...could relate. :( Take the comment about spacing seriously and please keep writing! Good story.