The Official Writing Challenge
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How precious. Your words made me feel for this boy. Nice details showing the action. :)
How sad that the parents didn't realize the potential ability of their son if they could have just pointed him in another direction. Interesting use of the prompt.
08/04/08
Oh, the poor absent-minded little fellow! He sounds like a fish out of water :( This was very sweet. I'm glad his parents weren't ratting on him for not being high-performance at the end. One thing to note: when you come to the end of a paragraph, double space so there's at least one blank line between paragraphs. This helps the reader see the paragraphs individually and keep his place in the reading better. Keep writing!!!
You kept me reading. I felt for this poor little guy...and...could relate. :( Take the comment about spacing seriously and please keep writing! Good story.