The Official Writing Challenge
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Intriguing. Great detail in descriptions. :)
Thank you for drawing me into an experience.
07/31/08
I think you had me holding my breath until the very end. Concentration is so vivid, here, the reader can feel part of it. Great job, writer!
Excellent writing! The suspense was palpable. I would love to know who was being guarded, and who was attacking.
I too would love to see who was the sentry guarding. Great detail, I found myself right there with him till the end. Great job.