The Official Writing Challenge
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07/11/05
"Beautifully Done" Your words so captured the moments of peace, love of God and nature. I loved it!
Listening to the hustle and bustle of everday activity with all its different noises, its so nice to feel the tranquility and quietness and emotions through this beautiful poem. A very good challenge article. Well done!!
07/11/05
Great reflection. I enjoyed reading through your article. In Christ Jesus, littlelight
07/14/05
Very well done -thanks for sharing it :)
How true - ONE MOMENT can make a huge difference, and is really all we ever have. I love this part:
"Listening with your heart
And hearing
With your soul --
Living in the now
And realizing
That tomorrow
Will change the sandy
Artistry upon the shore..."
07/16/05
I love every line!
07/17/05
This is one should certainly be a winner.
07/17/05
very very nice. thank you!