The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked the sentiments shared in the first stanza. The "AB" pattern was difficult to detect. Flow was very nice. :)
There were many things that I liked about your poetry. Your centering of it and careful planning were very effective for me. Thanks
A very nice flow to this and the form only adds to it. Well done.
The form of this poem is very visually appealing :) I have a question. How did you format the poem so that it would stay shaped when you submitted it? I would really like to know since I have a shape poem I'd like to post on FW but I can't get it to display without messing up. Please send me a private message and tell me how you got it to work! Thanks!