The Official Writing Challenge
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Engaging writing and amazing story!
07/27/08
This is a great entry! I was really engrossed in it, wondering what was going to happen next. Very good job!
I think you did a wonderful job capturing the emotion and all of the action. Very strong entry.
07/29/08
I like the story-telling voice - good use of first person POV. The story moves along at a quick pace and drew me right along with it.
Good fast pace writing with excellent emotion. Even more intriguing knowing it was a true story.
07/30/08
Whoa. What a sobering account...especially of the people who didn't listen or stopped to chat. It reminds me of the story of Noah. Well done!