The Official Writing Challenge
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07/29/08
I love this fantastic story. I felt every bit of rejection and heard every gry of the heart.
07/29/08
I loved the voice that shines here! It's just right with the setting and ending. Great story!!
07/30/08
Whoa, a bitter heart in the main character here! But I'm glad that she felt better by the end. It would be interesting to get to know Sabena better and watch her mature. A very engaging read :) Keep it up!