The Official Writing Challenge
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A daunting reminder good job with the imagery and the message.
07/26/08
Very, very good. A great reminder that God is also out there calling us to do his work on the streets of our life; too frequently our focus is in the wrong direction. Great message.
07/29/08
Very descriptive of the pace of the streets. An interesting read.
07/30/08
At times the narrative style seemed very wordy and made me stumble in my reading. Also it was discouraging that Matthew was given no support by his fellow believers. If I were him I'd be feeling just a little overwhelmed! This is a very good reminder of the lost world, though.