The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/08
You give a good picture of the way God works in our hearts to change our perspective.
07/27/08
Oh, good one!! I love the inner turmoil and using the phone for good. Well done!
07/30/08
Well done! Karen's frustration at the beginning is very understandable, and the reader stays sympathetic & wants her to do the right thing. Keep writing :)