The Official Writing Challenge
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07/27/08
Oh, chills!! So many things happen that could be avoided. You got me with the dectective--very nice (chilling!) twist. Good job!
Very well done and an excellennt use of the prompt!
07/30/08
Excellent chill! These sorts of unpleasant stories need to be told to the sometimes "know-it-all" youth of today, so they will learn to listen to the wisdom. Not all that Christians need to understand is sweet and uplifting. Well done.

Couple of edits: "liked the look" should be in past tense like the rest of the sentence, and "cognisant thoughts" is possibly a tautology, as thoughts are generally cognisant.
07/30/08
Ick (meant in a good way!). A very vivid account here and a good reminder that people are not what they seem. Well-written, though I did spot a few typos.
Wow I honestly never thought of a telephone in such a manner. Hmm....a very interesting and thought-provoking perspective.