The Official Writing Challenge
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We all need to listen more accurately before we repeat what we think we heard, right? Loved the story, reminded me of a game we called 'gossip' which I recently learned from some writers that the game my generation called 'gossip' was, in another generation called
"the telephone game".....LOL
Excellent! I think you really nailed the topic with this take! I was able to follow along without any hitches and I chuckled throughout at the way it changed. Great job!
It all sounded so convincing! Great story.
I love how this came flawlessly full-circle. It was easy to follow and very entertaining...a cute idea for a children's book since there are so many different scenes. Great job!
Scott, congratulations on your EC. This is very creative and delightful.
Scott, when I read this last night I knew it was a winner! I love the way the story progressed and how it looped right back around to a great ending! A big CONGRATULATIONS on a most deserved win!
Yes, I remember playing "The Telephone Game" as a child. This brought back many fun memories. A fun read.
Super take on "telephone". Congratulations - a well deserved EC. :)