The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a good concept. I wish you would have drawn it out a bit more. It was a little simplistic - there wasn't an emotional struggle your character when through to help the reader connect with him. Also, a new paragraph should be started when each person speaks.
A good effort though.
Blessings, Lynda
A nice start you could ad a bit more (ie a flashback of a troubled spot in their relationship) and this has a lot of potential to be an even better piece!
This is a good start, and lots of potential. Watch word choices, and allow the essay to flow. Keep writing, this essay shows you have a spark.