The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/05
How true! We often see God as we relate to our earthly fathers. And what a shame we can't have the relationship with Him we should have because of it.
With some tightening up, this piece could be a winner.
Blessings, Lynda
06/14/05
I felt this piece actually started well in the second paragraph. It elicited emotion ... sadness for this family. Keep writing!
06/14/05
Nicely written story about a tough situation.
06/17/05
This tugged a few heart strings with me, had a similer experience, which God turned around, thankyou.