The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
Okay, I have NO kleenex in the house! So sad. Sooo sad. Our memory is truly a gift and a treasure, and I feel so sad for people when it's taken away. Moving story that needs to be read.
I have tears in my eyes too. This was a hard topic for me because my mother is in Bob's place right now. I'm just "a nice lady" to her.
You did a great job of capturing the emotion and pain that go with this terrible stealer of life.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I felt it was perfectly on topic and you fit so much in without going over the word count! The ending is great...
07/19/08
This brought tears to my eyes. Well done.
The Word of God standest sure having this seal: the Lord knoweth those that are His. GOD never forgets.I too liked your story