The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/05
What a wonderful tribute to your dad. You are blessed to have such a wonderful earthly father. One thing you'll want to watch is tense change. You went from present to past a couple of times. But overall, a good entry.
Blessings, Lynda
I love the Teddy Bear descriptions... you may want to consider changing the title to include that somehow.
06/14/05
Wonderful tribute to your Dad. And what a household you grew up in!
06/14/05
A delightful picture of a loving father.
You were definitely blessed in many ways.