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07/17/08
What an interesting mix-up of memories and life. I liked the second to last verse the best! ^_^
07/21/08
This brings back memories of when life was so easy-going, have time to talk with the neighbor, and family dinners. That time doesn't sound too bad does it. It also brings to mind those whom we love and love to spend time with. Thanks for sharing.
07/21/08
Loved the lilt and the sentiment in this delightful poem. Good to bring levity into old age...Helen
07/31/08
Mary! You're back, and such a delightful trip down memory lane with your darling poem. I too love your title and the idea of a conversation between (grand)parent and child. Thank you for leaving a comment on my "right now" story. I really appreciate hearing from you.