The Official Writing Challenge
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07/17/08
Oh WOW! This gave me goosebumps. The way you wrote it the images I can see so very clearly, just WOW! Excellent writing! ^_^
07/18/08
This is such a sad story of love...lost for the time being, but everlasting. And a good scripture as a finale. What can I say? Poetry from the bottom of your heart. Poetry is like salve to the soul. It helps take away the hurt. I wrote my best poetry when I was undergoing some trial. I have heard others say this too. Very good. Thanks for sharing a part of your soul...Helen
Poignant and so lovely. Written from deep within the heart. This choked me up. A moving take on the topic. Well done!
07/21/08
This brought a memory back to me of a dear friend who had Parkinsens (sp?). One day the Pastor asked for someone who wanted to give a testimony for the Lord. This dear man, wheelchair bound, struggled to his feet, so he could try to get the words out that he could give praise to the Lord. There wasn't a dry eye in the whole church, at least that I could see through my tears. Thanks for bring back that memory for me.
07/21/08
They say a picture is worth a thousand words. You painted a wonderful picture of love. Thanks.
Lovely memorial poem of a lost loved one. I was touched.