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07/17/08
Loved the double meaning of this hear! The dialouge was simply wonderful too! I liked the "Paw" and "Memory" as a bucking bronco. Neat! ^_^
07/17/08
Good job, I could sense the excitement of the son and the joy of winning over both Memories.
07/18/08
I loved the double meaning in here. Fantastic idea!
07/24/08
Your name, Helen, means "light". You are certainly lighting the way for all to see your creativity with this poignant story.
Congratulations, Helen. I loved your parallel of the ride on Memory and the man's lost son. Good dialect, good parallel. A stunner.