The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/08
How precious and wonderful!You recreate this scenario beautifully, emotions, descriptions and all. Great writing!
06/14/08
I love the acceptance of the new family. Good job.
06/15/08
Powerfully and poignantly told. The tension was palpable. You captured the raw emotion and the self-doubt in both mother and daughter, but brought it to a conclusion that said everything would work out. Well told!
How brave.
You captured this sensitive moment very well.
06/16/08
Great description of emotions that ran through mother and daughter. You conveyed just how hard that moment would be. Good writing.
06/16/08
You seem to have captured the emotions & nervousness wonderfully. Great story and great writing!
What they all said. Nice writing, and a great title!