The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this take on physical family and church family. Cryptic!
A really good discussion-starter for youth groups.
A well-written and engaging story. My only problem was in the beginning when she was hauled out from under the table and told to go congratulate her cousin on her pregnancy. I thought the narrator was about six and was surprised that a 15-year-old would be hiding under the table. Other than than, I liked the story very much and it's a good illustration of how difficult it can be to stand up for one's Christian beliefs when surrounded by non-believers (even witches!) Good job.
Such a difference between blood families and spiritual families! How blessed we are when the two are combined!!