The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/08
Good character studies of both your dad and your aunt; they seem like interesting and eccentric people.

I felt that this lacked focus, a bit--a longer story just about your dad or just about your aunt might be something to consider.
06/17/08
Your grandmother sounds like she was quite the lady! I can easily picture her from what I remember of my great grandmother--who was also German.
06/18/08
Quite an interesting story. Thanks for sharing.