The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/08
What a tragic story--thank you for being willing to share it with us, along with the hope at the end.

You'll be able to capture your readers, and get them to read your important story, with closer edits for spelling and grammar. Sometimes we quit reading pieces that require mental edits. You're a writer of fine potential!
06/16/08
This is beautiful sharing. We know that God works all things for His good, but it is His love that allows us to see it in such a time of heartbreak. Thank-you.
06/17/08
God's love works in mysterious ways. The tragedy that engulfed you and your family brought you together in love and God's love was poured out in your hearts for each other so that hostility between your brothers was eclipsed and your relief at seeing it helped to assuage your grief.
06/17/08
A touching story with wonderful hope shining through at the end, leaving us with anticipation, not just tears.