The Official Writing Challenge
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Brilliantly written! You captured Marthaís character perfectly, but gave away nothing till the very last line. What a relief that God is more gracious in whom He includes on the list than any of us would be.
I also had no clue until the end. Nicely done - but I can see now how this fit perfectly your final line.
Oh! Good one! How often we take things like that on ourselves when it's not even what we're suposed to be doing! Great job!
Cool. I like the way you portray Martha. I often find myself acting like that, and can feel God telling me to relax and let Him take care of the details. Nice work!

A cleverly written article. The end really surprised me and made me look more seriously at Martha's character.