The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/08
Brilliantly written! You captured Marthaís character perfectly, but gave away nothing till the very last line. What a relief that God is more gracious in whom He includes on the list than any of us would be.
06/15/08
I also had no clue until the end. Nicely done - but I can see now how this fit perfectly your final line.
06/16/08
Oh! Good one! How often we take things like that on ourselves when it's not even what we're suposed to be doing! Great job!
06/16/08
Cool. I like the way you portray Martha. I often find myself acting like that, and can feel God telling me to relax and let Him take care of the details. Nice work!

Stella
06/19/08
A cleverly written article. The end really surprised me and made me look more seriously at Martha's character.