The Official Writing Challenge
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06/15/08
This started out well and I loved the line:
“All travel arrangements and housing accommodations have been paid in full. It will not involve any airliners, but it will be in the air.” However it then got rather heavy with all the Bible references and read more like a sermon outline than a story.
06/16/08
I especially liked this line: "but our spiritual family will continue on for all of eternity."
06/19/08
I like this article. It gives a serious look at what a spiritual family reunion is and the Bible quotes help to consolidate this. I don't think this was meant to be a story but a look into the future of what is in store for the believer.