The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/08
This is a cute story. Pay attention to spaces between paragraphs. Loved the way you painted the planting of the cushion, the despair and then the "wink".
06/13/08
This piece is both entertaining and witty. Born from a creative mind. Ditto on the paragraphing - watch your grammar and spelling. Excellent ending!
06/14/08
Well written, funny story.
06/16/08
The old whoopie cushion trick. LoL. Cute.