The Official Writing Challenge
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06/13/08
This is a cute story. Pay attention to spaces between paragraphs. Loved the way you painted the planting of the cushion, the despair and then the "wink".
This piece is both entertaining and witty. Born from a creative mind. Ditto on the paragraphing - watch your grammar and spelling. Excellent ending!
06/14/08
Well written, funny story.
06/16/08
The old whoopie cushion trick. LoL. Cute.