The Official Writing Challenge
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06/12/08
A candid account of the hidden feelings associated with death. Well done.
I liked this piece. It's well written. I particularly liked how you shared with your readers all the unexpressed thoughts and emotions of the caracters. Well done!
06/14/08
I liked this piece. A very sensitive account of the many emotions that death raises. Great Work!
06/14/08
There's a lot of hinted at emotion here. I could feel it simmering and brewing.