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This is lovely and sad at the same time. Wonderful descriptive writing.
So tender and touching. Good job relaying the how they 'arrived' in Heaven without belaboring--it allowed us to rejoice at this reunion.
Powerful descriptive writing which captures well the paradox that heaven is awesomely holy and yet our eternal home and place of rest. Your description of the babies lost before birth now secure in heaven gives hope to parents and grandparents in this situation, and is in line with Paul’s teaching in 1 Cor 7:14. Very well written.