The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this story. At first I didn't realize that this house was also the man's house, so that was a nice surprise. I like the title and the word "perspicacity." I had never heard the word before until this story.

We could all afford to start looking at things for what they can be rather than what they are.

Keep up the great writing.
I really enjoyed this article. You have captured the theme in a creative way. Nicely written, I could see the house very clearly. Well done!
I really enjoyed this article. I could see the house clearly from your description, and I think you have captured the theme
very well. Good writing!
This is a well written article. I think you have captured the theme for this week in a creative and original manner. I could see the house from your descriptive writing. Well done!
I liked the walk you took Dan on.

Would like to hear the rest of the story, this did grab my attention.

Enjoyable read.

Thanks for sending me to the dictionary. I love new words.
06/12/08
At first I thought somebody was trying to write "persnickety" - but had goofed on the spelling. But we learn something new everyday. Loved the stroll through the neighborhood with Dan and the "estates"...nicely done and very picturesque and sweet.