The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/05
Very nice.
06/15/05
Nice personal essay - thanks for sharing. A relationship with THE Father is truly the most important one.
Blessings, Lynda
06/19/05
Good basic entry. A good thesis sentence, then the essay followed point by point. A couple of grammar glitches, but an overall nice essay equating three "fathers."
I liked your title. I know what it's like to be sad over divorce but, our worth does come from the #1 Father!