The Official Writing Challenge
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06/07/08
I love the way that you move the story on without feeling the need to explain every little detail. This allows the reader to fill in the gaps himself and makes for a more memorable narrative. I enjoyed this lovely tale of loss and renewed hope.
I loved the ending to this story. It was so good to see the family's tragedy get turne dinto something positive with the new home. What a nice woman Jack's mother was.

Your dialogue in this was great. Thank you for sharing this.
Congratulations on a well deserved win. I enjoyed reading this very much and would love to read the next installment....
06/12/08
Congratulations on your win! You did a good job of capturing the emotions of the wife. Well done!