The Official Writing Challenge
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It is good to look back on our lives and to realize that God, our Heavenly Father had His hand on us. He is truly the ultimate protecting and loving Father. We all need to look back and see that in our own lives. Thanks for this gentle reminder!
06/14/05
I would have loved to hear more of the situations you alluded to. More detail I guess. But sweetly written.
06/14/05
Very nice.
06/15/05
Good effort - thanks for sharing. I agree about wanting more. I think the reader would have benefited from hearing more about the events you mentioned - how God saved you and what you learned from each. You possibly could have concentrated on only one event and expanded on it to connect with your readers a bit more. But I do look forward to reading more from you. Keep writing!
Blessings, Lynda
I could relate to looking back and realizing all the times the Lord had helped me and I never realized it. I would only suggest to capitalize because at first, I thought you were talking about your earthly father