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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: fathers (06/06/05)

TITLE: To my Father:
By Jessica Campbell
06/10/05


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It seemed to be that every unpredictable, awkward situation I found
myself to be in, there I knew my father would intervene and come to the rescue to save me. As I look back in my childhood, I am in awe at the many times I have been protected and saved from what could have been a devastating event.
I remember the time as a child that I could have been seriously injured from an accident that occured, but thanks to my father, The injury was minor.
I remember the time as a teenager I had found myself to be in an awkward situation with a group of guys. I was terrified, and wasn't quite sure of what to do. Just then my father showed up, and rescued me like many times before.
And now as a wife and mother, I can only give him credit for the countless
times he has bailed us out financially, physically, and spiritually. He has
always been there for me, and I can truly say, He has NEVER failed.
Thank you my Father, for your divine intervention in my life, for your
constant supervision, and for your faithfulness. To my Heavenly Father
I write. Thank you.


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Patricia Sprague06/14/05
It is good to look back on our lives and to realize that God, our Heavenly Father had His hand on us. He is truly the ultimate protecting and loving Father. We all need to look back and see that in our own lives. Thanks for this gentle reminder!
pam bryan06/14/05
I would have loved to hear more of the situations you alluded to. More detail I guess. But sweetly written.
Shari Armstrong 06/14/05
Very nice.
Lynda Lee Schab 06/15/05
Good effort - thanks for sharing. I agree about wanting more. I think the reader would have benefited from hearing more about the events you mentioned - how God saved you and what you learned from each. You possibly could have concentrated on only one event and expanded on it to connect with your readers a bit more. But I do look forward to reading more from you. Keep writing!
Blessings, Lynda
Michelle Burkhardt06/19/05
I could relate to looking back and realizing all the times the Lord had helped me and I never realized it. I would only suggest to capitalize because at first, I thought you were talking about your earthly father