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I really like how you tied your story together with each cousin helping the other at different stages of their lives and with the repetition of the title in both places.
I like how you tied everything together. Good story!
I enjoyed the story. :) I liked how you wrote about two different times in the cousins' lives and used the repeated phrase "Ah, it was nothing" to imply a friendship throughout the time in between the two vignettes.
Oh, I loved this. Nice job! I feel like part of this family of cousins now;)
GREAT title, and I love the way you tied the two stories together. The cousins saved each other's lives, one for "here" and one for eternity.
This is tender and heart felt. I especially liked how your MC felt embarrassed and loved at the same time. Yea God!!!
I like how the one cousin helped save the other one in a physical sense and the other cousin returned the favor in a spiritual sense. Good job!
Nice story. Love to hear of the salvation of those lost, even when it is late in life.
Carol, I've enjoyed reading through your stories here on FW. Wow! Your writing is amazing! Your stories are so vivid the reader becomes part of the story. I would love to read more from you! Hugs!