The Official Writing Challenge
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It looks like the cousins were going to get along far better than the sisters. I love how you tied "game" into the story, and I was very happy that the boys weren't as bad as they appeared.
This line is exceptional "The weight of a rolled-up, heavy remnant of childhood."

Your title was intriguing and your entry delivered.

Liked this clever angle very much.
06/05/08
Lisa, I don't know how I missed your entry when I was reading this week. It is delightful. A very creative approach to the topic, and a well-deserved "highly commended"! Excellent job! Blessings, Cheri
06/05/08
Congratulations Lisa! The Title says it all! Chuckle, chuckle! Creative fun read that makes a point in such a delightful way! Well done!
06/05/08
I loved this story - so true to life and really funny. (The fact that I have three big, messy sons adds to the humour!)
06/05/08
Congratulations on your "Highly recommend." This was great - FUNNY, FUNNY, FUNNY.
06/09/08
Cute story. And a different approach to the Cousins theme. Enjoyed it....Helen