The Official Writing Challenge
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This was excellently done. You achieved exactly what you set out to do. I can see children really enjoying this story based on the Bible, just as I did.
06/02/08
Excellent job! You have achieved your purpose; there is much food for thought here in this devotional. And it would be a great spring board for any teacher to use to start a discussion in a classroom. Nice work. Blessings, Cheri
06/02/08
Cute children's story!

I think you could take it even further--develop a bit more of a plot, and help us to get to know the boys a little better.

I liked your discussion questions at the end.