The Official Writing Challenge
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Your tale of cousins, very alike/yet different, revealed two very interesting lives with adventures similar/yet different.
06/03/08
I liked your perspective of adventure. Very interesting story - opposites and yet destined down the same path.
06/04/08
Very interesting. This story is well told and well developed. I like that you began in the cousins' childhood and carried them through to their adulthood - and death. What a sad story about the torture of the wild animals by this cruel boy; however, the cousins used the experience to better the world and to make their life count for something....Helen