The Official Writing Challenge
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Your use of mostly dialog told the story excellently. I loved the ending.
05/29/08
"Cooper knew he had the ability to astound--when sufficiently called to the challenge". I love that description of the relationship between the two men - and it was verified. Amazing depth in 750 words!
06/02/08
I enjoy a good story with good dialogue. The dialogue in this story is very believable. Well done. Loved the bond between the two cousins. Great ending.