The Official Writing Challenge
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Your description of a
family Thanksgiving made me yearn for a family holiday AND a piece of that fourteen-layer chocolate cake.
06/02/08
My eyes bugged out over the "14-layer cake." I say, bring it on! Loved the scene. I liked the voice of the narrator as well. My only suggestion would be to maybe to have a little dialogue between the girls or between them and their cousins. Over all, splendid story. What wonderful memories to have about growing up.