The Official Writing Challenge
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This was very creative. I enjoyed the coversations of the animals.
I really enjoyed this creative story, but it is way too short--you were just getting started. Does that mean there will be more to come?
05/29/08
Very imaginative. Loved the animals' names as well.
05/30/08
Clever and entertaining. The "cousin" connection is pretty weak, but the story was great fun to read.