The Official Writing Challenge
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05/23/08
Cute! Real cute! They must be friends of my feline/canine family. I could just see it all! A fun story. I enjoyed this read.

Just a note - keep it all in the same tense.
05/25/08
Oh, what a fun read! The POV was good and the voices of each one was distinct to me. Very cute.