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I like your story, and sympathise with the hurt at the back of it - BUT, I am a believer - in family pets, that is. Through a great many years, and a number of pets, I agree that there are those who really belong to just one family member while being friendly with other members of the family. But both in childhood and adulthood, I have known many who have been truly family pets. I trust you have since that time experienced your own particular pet friend - if not, I trust you will soon. God bless you.
05/25/08
I could feel the hurt and betrayal. Well done.
05/29/08
Well written indeed, though I hope the MC gets over her bitterness!
Congratulations on placing 12th place overall with this entry, Carol!