The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/08
A delightfully funny read! Loved the cliches for the goose. Good ending, too. Thanks for sharing.
05/22/08
Peck kisses and flutter hugs.....
Clever use of a mirror.

The pace of this was peaceful, even though it was a bit of a sad ending.
05/25/08
I like it! The voice was pleasant and so was the perspective. Well done!
05/29/08
Congratulations on taking 6th place in your level with this piece, Lollie!