The Official Writing Challenge
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Enjoyed the bit of dialogue and action in this piece. Nice read.
Beautifully written,with wonderfully rich descriptions and a compelling storyline. I was absolutely engaged!
You have some good descriptions in this story that really help put the reader in the campsite with your characters. This was an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing. :)
Fabulous story, and so well written. Great job.
Everthing about this is wonderful. I was warmed by the tone of this entry.

Dogs do make a difference. Thanks for sharing!
A tent filled with the odor of wet dog...

Great descriptions, you had us right there. Well done.
Not long for Intermediate, I think, with such vivid descriptions. I loved Storm's gentle demeanor, which you communicated beautifully.
I loved your story; the descriptions were wonderful.
Some great descriptions! I like the word play in the title of "Summer's Storm" so cute! And I'm glad that they were found and together. ^_^
Your words flowed richly throughout this entire story. The title was accurate in reflecting what happened between the little girl and the dog. You won't be hanging around Level 2 very long (hint, hint) with high quality writing like this story. Well done!
Well written, loved the descriptions and the atmosphere in this piece. You've done a great job.
Good descriptive language. As someone else commented, we were in the campground with you. I can't help wondering about Storm's puppies, though. I hope they were ok.
Well told and very moving. Your descriptions were excellent. Definetly a "show and tell". Lucky dog to have found the right tent!