The Official Writing Challenge
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Classic, beautifully written poetry! You so glorify God with your words and make me happy I believe too. "Wonderful!"
God as the merciful Redeemer is clearly evident in your word pictures. When one meditates on the images one can see with the eys of the spirit the experience of every soul. You have so wonderfully portrayed my story as well as yours.
what beautiful poetry--you are very gifted!
The ultimate portrait of a father, our Father, beautiful painted with your words.
Very well done - very creative.
Oh, I have been there, kneeling, feeling that shadow! You have captured the heaviness of the shadow and then, the relief as it is lifted by our Father's love! He is the only One who can remove the shadows of our sin and sorrow, and he's only a prayer away! You have taken us from despair, to hope, to the great joy in finding the One Father who will never leave us! How beautiful!