The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/08
A very good time and place to make connections and get to know seldom met family members. Thank you and God bless you.
05/16/08
I appreicate you sharing your story. That is great that you were able to not only get to know your mother-in-law better, but you also foudn otu about Women of Faith in the process.

I saw a few commas missing in spots, but I only bring that up to make you aware in case you didn't notice. Very minor thing that didn't detract from the story at all.

Thank you for sharing your story. I hope that you can continue to grow the bond between you and your extended family. :)
05/16/08
Oops looks like my last comment had some typos in it. I guess I better proofread my comments better huh? Sorry about that. :)
05/20/08
Thanks for sharing this personal story.

I think it would have been more immediate if you let us walk in your shoes and saw it through your eyes- I would have liked to have seen and heard what your experienced.
05/23/08
Congratulations, Annnora, on placing ninth in your level with this piece. Great job!