The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/08
Heart-breaking story which had a satisfying message at the end. You wrote this very well. The dialogue seemed authentic and the emotions realistic. Well done.
05/16/08
Thanks for your story. Very well written and it reminded me of at least one person in my own family.
05/19/08
I'm so quick to judge so that last paragraph really socked it to me. This has a great message.
Congratulations on your win. Great entry!
05/22/08
What a moving story! Congrats on your win!
I wondered about the title, but your ending clearly explained it to me. You are so right. We never really know what others are going through until we take the time to see things from their perspective. Wonderful story. Congratulations on the highly commended honor. :)
05/23/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. What a tragic story--for all involved. Loved the ending.
05/24/08
A well-deserved HC. Congratulations!
05/14/09
I love the delivery of your message. And the attitude your mc has toward her in-law- very realistic