The Official Writing Challenge
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Your portrayal of this distressing situation is very well thought out and not as jusgemental as it could well be.

Other than a couple places where 'their' snuck in as 'there' this story while sad, is well done.
05/19/08
Bitterness will eat a person from the inside out. It is so destructive, and not just to the bitter person, but to those around, especailly the family. So heartbreaking.