The Official Writing Challenge
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05/15/08
How heartbreaking this was...if it's true, my heart goes out to you.

I pray this is not a true story and that it did not involve you. It was well-written but so very sad.
05/19/08
I too hope this wasn't a true story. If so, how sad. If this is true, then it would make an inspirational book. If not, this is the type of story that movies are made from. Either way, there is a market for this. Well done.
05/19/08
I echo the others--how heartbreaking!
05/23/08
Thank you for your concern everyone. It's a true story but not mine - I was using a POV. There is more news though. The main character now has an excellent job back home and is returning, soon, to live near her sister.