The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 404 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
I loved this story, the rivalry of the brothers and the coming together for another child whose need they understand.
05/09/08
Authentic voice, and I really like the fast-paced dialogue.
Your dialogue is good and held my interest. I liked the ending, too. Oooh, what a difference in those twins. Would be interested to know what careers they chose. Nice work.