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What a great lesson you've presented for two little girls by their aunty. The Bible story was used so aptly for the little squabblers. I smiled when one requested prayer. Even children need God's help.
05/09/08
This would make a great addition to the Sunday School curriculum for primary aged children.

Some of the dialogue struck me as not always realistic--not how real children actually speak. And be careful with your speech "tags". It's almost better to just use "said", and to let the person's speech indicate the accompanying emotion.

Little children are
so precious, aren't they?