The Official Writing Challenge
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You took us on a splendid journey with a strange and estranged lot, brought together to say the unspoken things and leave in peace, connected. Wonderful.
05/08/08
Beautiful and descriptive writing.
05/09/08
What a journey! Really when all is said and done we must, "just love them". Good job.
05/15/08
Congratulations on your 2nd place. I love these lines:

“Lord, Lord! What do I say? Give me the opportunity to bring him into you.”

“Just love them.” That’s all I heard in my heart.

So much truth wrapped up in that.

Nice job with the topic.
05/15/08
This was a well-written, heart-warming piece. You did a great job showing, not only the disconnectedness, but the reconciliation as well. Your words were very poetic, which worked nicely with the mood of the story.