The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a delightful story. You've reminded me excellently how much fun it is to reminisce about growing up with sibling.
05/08/08
This is delightful, and I love the contrasting terms in your title.

Take a look at your second paragraph...there are many -ing verbs. You can give your writing more variety by sometimes using other verb forms.

Thanks for this glimpse into you and your sister and your childhoods!